I'ts not a collab?
That's not the reason I have you a low score. The movie was just bad... The animations were choppy. The blood was the same blood over and over again. And there was no originality at all. It's been done before many times and it's kind of old.
Now don't get me wrong, there is potential in this, but you need to work harder, trying getting a smoother animation by increasing the FPS or using the onion view. That helps it give it a better smooth motion.
Keep trying, you will eventually get it.